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I miss you

I miss you
What else can I say?
I miss you
It won’t take away the pain but –
it just feels good to finally be able to say it
No, I love you.
And I miss you
You never let us know how bad
You didn’t want to make us worry
now I worry anyway

And I think
How would it be right now?
Where would you have been -
5 years -
10 years -
15 years from now

I will never know.

I miss you.
No one needs to tell me why
I'm not sure I want to know
but they won’t know the correct answer
There are no words
just the memories
I love you
And I miss you

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I miss you Beth.

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  • Lucifers Seductress
    August 29, 2007

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    Oh Kay, I miss her too, so much. She was so much fun and she made me laugh so much it hurt I'm going to miss her and our little group chats between me, her and Carlie. Those were some HILARIOUS times. She was - is - a very bright star and a beautiful soul. Keep writing, and let's work on our collaboration soon, just keep sending me the emails of your work. I LOVE you.

    love,
    Alexis


  • Porcelain Doll
    August 27, 2007
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    Oh darling... *hugs you tightly* I... have been trying to put that out of my head, but have found myself unable to. I logged onto aim for the first time in like months.. and expected to be bombarded with messages from her, only to realize that... wouldn't be happening anymore -.- This is such a beautiful poem.... If you need to talk, I am here.
    ~Amy


    • tinydarkgoddess
      August 28, 2007
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      I know what you mean, Beth and I had this huge email war going on and it suddenly ended. *sigh* I decided it was as good enough time as ever to start getting down those feelings and stop trying to pretend she isn't gone.
      This is one of my more...toned down pieces I must say.
      I want to see you writing more but with school starting, I don't expect you to have much time, but just keep me posted, hm?
      PS Get on Damian's ass for not posting. I know for a fact that he has a lot of work he is neglecting to post.
      Love you!

      love,
      Katrina