The rainbow of orange and yellow cascading in a tree
the cool feel of the dancing autumn breeze
a cold comfort feeling of the day
the relaxing feeling in the night
the starry Autumn night
The glaze in the Autumn moon
animals resting under the stars
the dawn of a cool morning
refreshing souls while we become wiser
A contest entry
- September by Tamera.
1200 points, ended September 5, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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The last line of this poem is the most intense, " refreshing souls while we become wiser" both the season of the year and the season of our lives brings wisdom. That's why I chose this theme. Autumn can be taken so many ways metaphorically.
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