Laughing to the madness that cheapens his silhouette,
He watched her innocence shatter with no sense of regret.
Dark coloured sequins marching precarisly through the night,
Leaving her drowning powerless in this emotional sacrifice.
Stretching her weary arms persuasively to the sky,
Praying the heavens would listen to her mournful cries.
Sending down rains to cleanse her tear stained pale face,
Wash away her abandoned hearts; bitter disgrace.
Moving through an ocean that she could never comprehend,
Her heart a black sapphire only the forgotten could understand.
Author notes
3.The sky poured her misty eyes tears
A contest entry
- PIF yay my 3rd one...and im counting..i know :D by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended August 27, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Very powerful poem you created. Full of wonderful images. Many congrats on the gold it was well deserved.
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Thankyou for your kind comment
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this was a wonderful write full of emotion and a beautiful take on the prompt
i loved how you penned thi together
well done and best of luck
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prompts up on page...yes...i said prompts..
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