I sit and wait forever
and find that time stands still
There's a part of me
that weeps for an end
Let go, just let go
and you won't have to cry
Slip away and sleep in silence
no one will ask you why...
I walk and think for a while
and find that I have gone nowhere
Who do I follow
when it is empty?
Lay low, just lay low
and you won't have to fight
Hide and tremble in the shadows
everyday is night
Author notes
Written for a friend. I love you.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
Lay low, just lay low
and you won't have to fight
Hide and tremble in the shadows
everyday is night
Wonderfull write for your friend
After reading your Bio, I was pleased it was not for you
I seldome ever say Excellent on any first read
Almost Gifted in places
Rick
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I can only imagine who this was written for... or maybe it doesn't take that much imagination... *sighs*
"Slip away and sleep in silence
no one will ask you why"
I have wanted to say that so many times, in so many ways, but... I am too selfish.
Thank you for writing what I could not. This is a beautiful poem darling.. It is nice to read your words again.
~Amy
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New poetry. Sweetness!! This is fantastic and short. You always write stuff that is good and it makes me feel dumb.
Tell Gracie I love her and I miss her.
I am TRYING to be safe. Don't worry too much, I'm a big boy I can take care of myself.
Again, this is some great stuff. Write some more and I'll read it when I have the chance. I love you, sis.
love,
Rich
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