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Hollow Vase

the melting EGO
sits at my bedside
lurking in the far corners
yet it bares to me
newspapers of who I can be
filtering my senses
to a void in self-being
who am I?
enters as I paste the words
on my four walled depression
empty vases of dried
up thoughts and hope
I am trapped inside
pity of self decline
who will come help me?
I sit and stare
with no answers
in great disappearance
I dissolve
the water of life
in my hollow vase

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 28, 2007
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    kkatie55

    I love this; I really like the way you 'used' the picture yet painted it at the same time with your words; the readers can visulize the picture with your words wonderfully

    Fabulous write

    Thank you very much for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda