Beauty's bouquet abounds in arrays
of soothing sanguine plumes,
softly inducing the spirit
to become a leaf of calm
floating in swaying invitation
upon the tethered charms
nestled between the trees.
Panorama envelopes conscious
spirit inhales each layer of visions
calling forth the profound candles
while rocking to a breeze's invisible hands
letting the moment
turn to Elysium's kisses.
Discovering within
the recesses of eternity
lost during the traffic snarls to the soul,
nature playing its secret symphony
upon the gossamer lilting texture.
Incurable and infectious peace
transcends the utterances
from clap trap ghosts,
wind carries them to the clouds
where they become doves,
hanging one's cares
on an amnesia current of surrender.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest by R-Evolve.
1500 points, ended September 11, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was beautiful. I could have been in this place in my mind without the picture. You described such a wonderful place. Congratulations on the Silver.
Well done.
Soulful Woman
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Thank you for the wonderful comment
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The imagery is so captivating. Just like laying back in a hammock and resting as the gentle breeze blows. Very well done oh talented one. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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A very beautiful piece you have written here. I love the imagery and flow in the poem.Masterfully written capturing peace and surrenity in wonderful ways.
Absolutely breathtaking a splendid poem you have penned.Best of luck to you in this one.
Tony
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