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Towards Dancing Queen (Senryu)

towards dancing queen
hopeful suitor approaches-
disco balls

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Image #3 used for inspiration.

A contest entry

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  • NoWayJo
    September 2, 2007

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    Really cute, Raist, with a great twist in the last line--And as I read it, it takes two disco balls to approach the dancing queen!  :)

     

    Thanks for this wonderful entry to the contest!

    Jo

     

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  • Mark Witucke
    August 30, 2007
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    that's funny!


  • Caitlin1290
    August 27, 2007

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    DO NOT WATCH ODINS LINK!

    WARNING DO NOT CLICK THE LINK SENT BY ODINS REVENGE IT IS OF A RUSSIAN BEHEADING PLEASE DONT NOT WATCH