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Are/Were

I thought you loved me
I thought you/I cared
Family - that's what you are/were

(oh - side note- delete
where currently appropriate)

I need you/I needed you
I didn't think you'd be a hypocrite
Friends - thats what we are/were



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  • anaisnais
    August 27, 2007
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    I think this is simplistically clever! Nice.