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Thank you

I’m sorry I’m such a bitch to you,
I don’t know why I blame you for all my problems.
Every time I turn around you’re there,
Making sure I’m alright.

But I fight you,
And I can’t bring myself to like you enough.
You have done so much for me,
And you know me so well.
But still I push you away,
Still I try to hurt you.

So,
If you read this,
I want you to know,
Even though you helped cause so much trouble,
That trouble would have come anyway,
I just couldn’t admit it.

If you do read this,
I’m sorry if I hurt you,
And thank you,
For being there.

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  • Pippin-and-Merry
    June 10, 2008
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    AWWWWWWWWWW!! That's CUTE!! And uncannily beautiful.

    • Vania
      June 16, 2008
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      hey! thanx....i wrote it ages ago, like last year....but thanks fro commenting!!!!


  • Amber Silverhair
    December 22, 2007
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    A paean of pain

    This poem tells the reader so clearly that it hurts to love and trust. When someone gives you unconditional love it is very hard to accept it, especially if you do not love and value yourself.

    The emotion and the message of this poem is very clear.


  • Faerie.Princess
    August 28, 2007

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    this is a beautiful poem and its sad that people do that, hurt the person whos there for them, but its good u can see what your doing and can say your sorry. great poem and keep writing
    Nat

    • Vania
      August 30, 2007
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      Thanks for commenting, it is sad that people do that, unfortuently i do it too.
      thanks again,
      ~alex


  • anaisnais
    August 27, 2007

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    What a beautiful acceptance of what has passed and appology in itself. I hope the person to whom it was meant reads it.

    • Vania
      August 30, 2007
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      I do too. Thank you so much for commening.


  • Angelica de Morte
    August 27, 2007

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    Am I meant to feel something hit home here?

    It's a beautiful poem, by the way. Well done darling. Love you always!

    • Vania
      August 30, 2007
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      lol
      probs. thanks for commenting hon. love you too!!!

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