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just another failed affair

Tell me honey
Is it true when you said you only wanted me when you were drunk.
Maybe I should have slapped your face when I had the chance.
Instead of taking you to bed and thinking to myself how much I loved seeing you above me.
Holding my hips in that monotonous rocking motion.
Repeating my name as I whisper yours in between gasps and biting you.
Baby it you it was just a game.
But to me it was more like love.
Not that you'd care.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    October 3, 2007

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    Nope not that he'd care, not that any guy seems to care in this situation.
    This one hits home a lot but not with the drunken thing.
    Great write.


  • Miss Faith
    August 28, 2007

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    whoa.

    this was stunning in it's own way.

    I loved the last two lines...

    lovely. and yet so sad.