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Without You I Can't Breathe

Without you I can't breathe.

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  • katie-jo
    August 28, 2007

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    consumed by your infatuation for someone...
    fabulous one-liner.
    thank you for entering and much luck in the contest.


  • vici377
    August 27, 2007
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    totally consumed

    EXCELLENT one-liner..


  • astralshepherd gold member
    August 27, 2007

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    so much said so artfully with so very little - a one liner which speaks volumes of sorrow and pain.

    blessings and best wishes,

    ~richard


  • Devils Reject
    August 27, 2007

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    even with just one line you have captured the feeling that so many of us have had when we have lost love. awesome!


  • tawk gold member
    August 27, 2007

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    I can so relate, I know that without my husband Jason or my daughter Jasmine I don't know how I would go on in life. So much said in one line. Good luck in the contest


  • xxxPoeticWhisperxxx
    August 27, 2007

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    hmmm

    In those few words come out emotions of pain, and hurting.... Whoever you are talking about is clearly very special to you and very close to your heart... Remember Sweety... He'll always be in your heart and he'll always be part of your soul.... The pain may never end but it might ease in time.... To what I see you are a strong woman and you are very powerful... You right the most beautiful things in just the simplest words.... great job on this... i'll talk to u later.... take care!!

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