People complainin'
While acid is rainin'
on Grandma's garden,
that they never learned
how to grow.
Earth is changin'
the plates are re-arrangin'
and Mother Nature has
a message of her own.
Ets comin' and HAARP's a hummin'
and the government aint tellin'us
what we really need to know.
A contest entry
- WHAT LIES IN THERE? by R S Adams Jr.
1000 points, ended September 10, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MY HUMONGOUSLY AWESOME KINDAH FANTASY CONTEST! by HarvesterOfHearts.
700 points, ended September 7, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I WANT LYRICS by RebelJester.
340 points, ended October 7, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is an esoteric piece I am working on. Contest won't let me submit two poems....
Comments
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well done..
...I like the rhyme as you use it in an unusual way.
Cryptic in substance, the poem seems to see a paradox between natural forces and the government influences - 'what we really need to know,' which is what lies beyond the doors. Thought provoking and topical.
Richard
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sorry yeah the E.T part... i'm sorry i missed that for like some government... thing... sorry yeah okay i get it better know... (it's been a long day) however most of it is still true... well whatevr... good write.. you caught my interest at the title
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this poem is so true... about what will happen to the earth... and i love it for that reason... but can you tell me how it would be a fantasy if it's true?
tell me that and i'll take a closer look okay?
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