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Eye

Eye can see the torture of the universe
spreading like a wildfire,

Eye can see the pain
that life withstands
      upon hurtful cries,

Eye can see the Destruction
taking every soul away
        holding tightly
  until piles of sand fade into the blue.

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  • Just-Meghan
    September 22, 2007
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    great write. the simplisty makes it all the more thought proviking.