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gobbed on the roof

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gobbed on the roof
teeth sticking together
peanut butter

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Image compliments of: http://www.jellymuffin.com

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  • NoWayJo
    September 2, 2007

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    You really have me laughing by this haiku, Polly. Did you know that on that old TV show they got Mr. Ed to appear as though he were talking by spreading peanut butter on the roof of his mouth? This man in the avatar has that peanut-butter expression though I've never thought of it until reading your haiku.

    Thanks for this fun entry to the contest!

    Jo


    • Pollycheck
      September 2, 2007
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      Jo

      I was staring at this one trying to think of something and my grandson walked in eating a PB & J sandwich. That was my inspiration.

  • quakietree
    August 27, 2007

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    Funny!

    I looked at this avatar for a while trying to think of something- peanutbutter never crossed my mind.
    Good job.
    Good luck in this contest.
    qt

    • Pollycheck
      September 2, 2007
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      quackietree

      Thank you for your comments. I am glad that you enjoyed my writing.

  • eternal-devotion
    August 27, 2007
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    This is cute

    This is very funny and so apt for this picture.


    • Pollycheck
      September 2, 2007
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      eternal devotion

      Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my ku. Your comments are appreciated.

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