the rooster crows
as the sun rises
but not Jo
the rooster crows
as the sun rises
but not Jo
Author notes
Image compliments of: http://www.jellymuffin.com
In a list
A contest entry
- The Avatar Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Not Required on This One
Comments
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Just stopping by to finalist-list the entries, but noticed you have this in your "military" catalogue of poems...???
I suppose it may have something to do with that "body armor" bathrobe the avatar-image/ME is wearing, huh? LOL
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haha! This is adorable about the cock crowing. Enjoyed the humor! My daughter fits into this category as well but I darn-near beat that rooster's shrill. I is usually up before he crows writing poems!!! ha Luv ya, Belle
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ma belle
Thank you so much. I am glad that you enjoyed my JoKu.
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LOL Pour her a cup of coffee! What a gorgeous background, I love the twinkling stars! Great haiku!
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Susie
Do you think just one cup of coffee would be enough. Some mornings I need the whole pot.
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I'm laughing so hard here--It's so sweet to be the namesake of this haiku, and though I'm not so sure about any resemblance to the avatar-image, I do need that first cup of coffee in the morning!
Thanks for the laughs and this really cute entry, Polly!
Jo
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Jo
I was hoping that you wouldn't be offended, but I knew you had a great sense of humor.
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I was wondering what to do this avatar, but my muse was playing hard to get. Now that I have seen your effort though I think I'll go and find another picture to work from as I don't think I can top this one.
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Raist
Thank you so much for the vote of confidence, but I have read your poetry and I am sure you could give me a run for my money.
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