I want to be the girl you always wanna be around,
the one you'll never let hit the ground.
I want to be the girl you'll embrace when she's crying,
the one you like without me trying.
I want to be the girl you look for first when you walk in,
the one you can see within.
I want to be the girl you point to and say, "That's her,"
the one to which you refer.
I want to be the girl that always puts a smile on your face,
the one that's never a disgrace.
I want to be the girl you make laugh,
the one that you can't pass.
I want to be your girl.
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A contest entry
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Lovely piece, and I totally know this feeling. You captured it perfectly!
Thank you for the entry and good luck in the contest.
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I think we got it, you want to be that girl, lol. Sorry just being a smarty. I can understand these feelings, as I am sure most females can or have at some time in their lives. Nicely said. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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I really like this poem, it is well written!!
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Excellent
this seems to send a clear message to whoever you wrote it for, it makes you want somthing that you have been thinking about for a while. Just in the future, when you want to rhyme, dont force yourself, write it in your voice, then write another version in slant rhyme. then see whice one sounds better, if its tough to make yourself rhyme, then i say dont do it.
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I honestly didn't even try to rhyme on this one...
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amazing!
This is so real!
May I send this to my sweet heart, you will have credit of course, but only with your permission.
great job!
I want to be the girl that always puts a smile on your face,
the one that's never a disgrace.
I want to be the girl you make laugh,
the one that you can't pass.
I want to be your girl.
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alot of my friends have used this one...yes you may.
Thanks for the kudos.
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This is so good. I love it. It is like every girls dream to be like this for a guy. I love it. I can really relate to it too. My favorite part is
the one you like without me trying.
This is soo god. I love it -
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Thank you!
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Your style of poetry reminds me so much of myself when I was just a few years younger. You;d be surprised how much can change in five years. Haha... Anyways... I think that you have a lot to learn as far as poetry goes. As you get old your poetry will mature with you. But you have a wonderful mind. I really did enjoy this. Keep it up.
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