You travel
where I travel;
road laden with
telling thoughts.
Eyes gleam,
to shine as twilight turns
unite to views of one.
No spoken words
nor written line
could paint the voice
of truth we know.
So here
in glow of bright lit moon
our lips shall brush
together close.
Plunged deep within
such fine persuade,
the feel of flesh on flesh.
And we forever bound
shall rise to witness
golden glow
as morning sings our own.
Author notes
CANNOT use the following words:
love miss kiss hug caress
touch skin fondle heart hold
A contest entry
- Who Do You Love? (I WARN YOU... IT'S EXTREMELY CHALLENGING!) by Cherokee.
750 points, ended September 15, 2007, 22 entries
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wonderful romantic poetry, from a beautiful poetess, just what the doctor ordered, loved it, Eddy
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Beautiful Pam! Extrodinary. You were definitely up to the challenge! So eloquently written yet your words scream the ones you could not write! Wonderfully done!!!!!!
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a beautiful romantic piece which I imagine was more difficult than meets the eye after reading the author's notes...very well done
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incredible!!!! i thought those words were all through this piece!
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a good piece with the restrictions of not using the certain words, ah love, it is missed so we need to blow a kiss and hug and caress its touch, our skin needs to fondle the heart's hold lol
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Thank you for your entry. I'll be back with applaus.
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