I am a feather in the wind,
it's evident
it's baffeling
and easily artful.
I'm practicle
and i'm crazy in happiness.
It leaves my mind numb
and i keep craving more of it.
My freestanding crush
on lifes so chaotic,
yet i'm spotless.
Sporting a REAL
down to earth time in the skys.
All the kinds of thought,
gone.
Stuck in the clouds
while i'm a sparrow on the sun.
Author notes
I'm amazingly happy.....Not everybody around me is but i am and i'm loving it! Soaking in life cus all of it is good even the bad! I only wish i could share. (newly edited)
A contest entry
- Your BEST Prewrite! - For Mike [degarmo] - by Never Fall in Love.
950 points, ended October 29, 2007, 146 entries
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Hmm .. you have penned something that alot of people might not be able to relate to at this moment. Most poetry is sad or dark or the annoying love ... and I have to admit that I'm part of those as well ..
But you've done a great job,
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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Sweetheart this is just beautiful and it has a very positive uplifting message,love ya,Hazel
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All the kinds of thought,
gone.
Stucks in the clouds
while i'm a sparrow in the sun
That part right there just made me smile, i was like gosh that is so her! haha but ur too awesome... lol well ok your not too awesome because then you would be like tooo! or whatever but your great and a good friend.. ttyl great write
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I love the sense of freedom in this poem. It raises the heart's spirits and brings with it a wind of energy. A truly remarkable write. Great job!
-Nick
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There's a door on the other side of the sun, when you find it, you gonna open it?
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