[ she had a bad day ]

she had a bad day

try to make the pain go away

as she reaches for her knife

she over looks her life

they had no they had no right

tears running down her cheeks blocking her sight

the anger leaving her eyes

blood flowing and she cries

he comforts her life

and she puts down her knife

she puts down the knife

she starts a new life

A contest entry

The Way She Feels. by Ravenblood. 875 points, ended October 19, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
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XxShOoTiNgStArxX
July 22

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O I love this!! Started so negative and full of pain, ending so soft with a stronger and new life!! Wish everybody would take the bad and turn it to good!!
So Imaginery and great rythme!! Excellent job hun!!
*Kelsi*
Deady Innocent
June 13

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very good Mad. I like it a lot.
and PS, thanks for showing me your page at school and getting me involved. this is awesome.
pinkhawk
August 10, 2008

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....hopefully everybody will do the same thing- start a new life and let the bad day vanished...for me this is very nice!!!!
MorningMist
August 3, 2008
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:D
Great poem. No wonder you were an Honorable Winner!
Ravenblood
August 26, 2007
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Aww. thats got such a sweet ending. i wish i could let my father in like that. Though one problem, "reanilizes" is not a word, i even looked it up on dictionary.com. if you could please fix up the mistakes it would be great, thank you for entering and i wish you the best of luck.