thunder screams overhead;
giant bubbles bursting.
&
soft tears fall from the skies
as angels cry.
I tilt my head back,
gulping the cool raindrops.
feeling a sudden rush of
newness wash over.
&
I take your hand,
dancing along the streets
as the rain hits on our backs,
we burst into
helpless peals of laughter;
as the rain stops to a shower
and the grass is draped with
sweet fresh after-rain smells.
I kiss you.
A contest entry
- FREE VERSE, OTHER OPTIONS. by AngelicMistress.
1000 points, ended August 27, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB WITH THIS PIECE, POET
GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST, AND THANK YOU FOR ENTERING IN SAME.
TANYA
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Wowe... So sweet!!! Awww.... i've seen little kids do this and i just imagine myself in that situation cuz i've never really done that before!!! Its so cute, when kids kiss eachother in the friendly manner... a lil' peck on each others cheek and then they laugh about it and continue running around and jumpling around and playing a fool once again!!!
Ok, that was all about kids... u know the keen interest i have on kids don't you! Well, this was just a beautiful poem sooo beautifully written!!! awesome... and rather facinating as well! Beautiful once again...
(i imagined u doin tt when u were a kid with a close friend and i'm still laughin my head off!!! imagining u as a kid is like... AWWWWW)
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