Horizons Blue

Trip into blue-

Spiraling seduction,

Subconscious sadism,

Unable to adhere,

The affiction dissapears-

Suddenly falling into dust...

Who now can I trust?

Abandoning a must,

As the stars apear.

Dawn is drawing near,

As is next time

Our horizon'll shine through.

Next to you,

Fading deeply into

Our horizons blue...

Author notes

♥2: I think about your face and how I fall into your eyes
♥3: And it's you and me and all of the people and I don't know why I can't keep my eyes off of you

-Por el, y solo el.

Te amo.

Por todos los anos.

Te amo.

A contest entry

Dedication by poetrysheartbreak. 450 points, ended November 5, 2007, 25 entries
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poetrysheartbreak
October 24, 2007

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I like this piece a lot. However, I'm not quite sure of what or to whom it is a dedication to. Great write though.
FallingTwilight
August 27, 2007
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Nice take on the prompts, good use of alliteration. Best of luck,

xKaitlynx
FallingTwilight
August 26, 2007
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Prompts are up, good luck!

xKaitlynx
FallingTwilight
August 26, 2007
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That's why I love quickies because it's a good way to get my muse flowing.