Oh where
Oh where
are you
Sweet child
The sheeps in the medow
Cows in the corn
Im praying for you
darling
Make it to a phone
Dont worrie about money
Just push the O
Tell the person your name
Someone will come to take you home
Momma and Daddy are waiting for
YOU
All your family misses you so
The world is looking
Just so you know
We all want to see that sweet smile
Glow
I know you can do it
Just push the big o
Call Maddy
We need you so!
A contest entry
- The never ending contest for Maddy McCann by getsbetter.
3600 points, ended October 8, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow my dear sis love this one.
love bro rev papa -
How great of a rhyme and beautiful flow of words sweet friend. Thank you for entering...GETS
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I enjoyed entering it was my pleasure! I Thank you for the Bronze, I never expected that....... Has there been any word of what has happend to Maddy?
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There is an ease and flow in your style...I hope one day Maddy can dial that important 0 number...you have expressed great emotion throughout as though you were reaching her through telepathy, please never stop praying and thank you for your kind supportive entry...
~Lilac~
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LilacThOughts
Thank you for your wonderful comment, and for even reading my poem for Maddy, I sure hope she calls home soon..... or that who ever has her takes her home to her parents.
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Oh this is such a heart renching poem. I think I've read enough of them tonight. I cannot cope with anymore. This girl has been on my heart since she went missing. I even had a dream about her and I'm convinced a man took her. I just cannot imagine the pain these poor people are feeling. People so quick to point the finger of blame. A brilliant poem. Welldone on capturing the emotion it is very very difficult to write about and welldone for giving points for this worthy contest. I felt the same I gave some points not bothered about winning just wanted to express my sadness about this.
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Mickie27
Thank you for your comment, I sure hope this girl is alive and well. I havent heard anything.......
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this is a wonderful piece and i think police should take this poem and issue it out like it was the most important paper in the world.
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Very good job! Wonderful advice for anyone missing. Hopefuly some will read this and take it to heart!
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Thanks for reading goalsv, its such a sad thing a child missing like this, no sight of her nothing but the blood the dog picked up. Gee some people in this world are cruel as they come.... Impraying for this child that she is alive and out there somwhere......
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