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Hurt

There is no blood

But still I'm bleeding

On the inside

Because I'm hurt

Hurt so bad I cry

You can't see it

But I do

Because I'm hurt

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  • Artemis Gem
    September 4, 2007

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    There is no blood

    But still I'm bleeding

    On the inside

    very strong even though its so short. I really like this piece.

    pegleg