Palpable perceptions darting on and off screen
When you stepped out the door
I stepped into the scene
Indolently switching channels of my brain
There was a red spot on the wall
Just as you disappeared it came
Disarming silence
I'm making a fist
And you can't even finish your sentence
This is how you left me
With no chances or amenities
I stood there biting my tongue
In knee deep density
Imprudent little ties
Wrapped up in spider webs
And words I forget too often
Send me a piece of memory
Toss it in my coffin
I got the scruples over you today too
And I wondered what you thought of that
If you were sitting there distracted
What were you even getting at?
Solicitously scripting lines
Like acrobats brushing against fate
It isn't that I was afraid of the fall
I was just nervous if you saw
Especially when walking straight is involved
You opiate me
Transcending all my blacks to grays
Hooked on arranging plays of nothing
But worried faces in an open crowd
I heard you say speak to me quietly
But for the first time I spoke out loud
Bury my deplorable thoughts
Underneath blankets of the season
Perhaps I'll dig them up tomorrow
When all the leaves fall from reason
I was precariously trying to step into your eyes
It was nothing personal I thought
This is where I got snagged and caught
It was common ground
But look at us now,
Both completely shot
Author notes
Seriously, I did use all my vocabulary, they inspired me. I decided I didn't want to study them in a boring way. So THUS DEFINITION WAS BORN.
Jeez I'm thirsty.
All in a hard school nights work.
Hahahahaha. I used all my ninth grade vocabulary terms :)
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Wonderful
very creative and well done.
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Graciasoo
I'm gladiss you liketh thy work
I was extrmely in need of memorization of vocabulary. Although i forget some of them now..:/
BUT THANKYOU
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And you used them well! When I read this I think about something I've been wanting to do, things I've been wanting to say, but have been afraid of the reaction, scripting lines, but afraid of the fall, or of not making any sense, things coming out all wrong....stumbling on my words. Can I walk the straight line...will you see? It's quite amazing how this seems to make perfect sense to me.
Yep, that's how I was left, words to forget, but I will not forget and won't give up either
I'm a lover, not a fighter, but I will fight for love...yep.
Brilliant work as always girl, way to utilize your school work in a hobby! Clever!
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YEAH! Congradulations you left a pretty a different kind of comment this time. LOL! Yeah its obvious that we have about the same problem going on. I'm a lover and a fighter. Just a cowardly shy fighter. I'll only do good under an extreme amount of pressue, except that pressure hasn't quite exploded me yet. I'm still heating. haha. When it does I dont know..but..it will. It might take awhile but it will. I'll just get tired of hestitating. Since I'm such a mellow go with the flow person, it'll probably be something to make me mad first. Then it'll all come out. It's my hypothesis. It just hasn't been experimented Haha. Wow, i sound a little off my nutter.
THANKYOU. I know, it was funny, i actually enjoyed studying.
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