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Raven is my soul.

Darkness all around. A man in the center.
A long dark flowing cloak around him.
The man stood staring with red peircing gaze.
He moved and his cloak billowed like the flap of a wing.
At that moment the bird flew up into the sky.
A large raven in the place of the man.

Author notes

I dont know about this one. I want to do a ryhme but right now my mind isnt for it. I wish i had all my old poems to post.

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  • CrystalFlower
    November 8, 2007
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    I love ravens! So this poem is awesome, like the rest! Keep up the good work!


  • allalone47
    August 31, 2007
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    wow that is really good I really like this one like alot!!

  • The Exercated
    August 26, 2007
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    oooh, purty; Tell moi, do ye write stories too?