A kiss from a rose on a sunset night,
As the clouds dip into the sea.
A kiss from that rose as the waves fall,
Over the beach to a rose kissed me.
A kiss from a rose on a sunset night,
As we wrap into lovers embrace.
A kiss from that rose as homeward we go,
To a bed clothed in satin and lace.
A kiss from a rose on a sunset night,
With passion and warmth do we grasp.
A kiss from that rose that blossoms and blooms,
My hand in her labour pain clasp.
A kiss from a rose on a sunset night,
That wanton and curvy young bride.
A kiss from that rose that huddles our babe,
So loving, in motherly pride.
A kiss from a rose on a sunset night,
Without whom I'd not shared my life.
A kiss from that rose who selflessly filled,
The place of my darling rose wife!
anaisnais (C)
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Prompt:- Love write about true love, sad love, crappy love. Whatever
A contest entry
- CONTEST 1 DAY LEFT by Jeremy0826.
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Thanks for your entry, Thanks for entering and very good luck too u!
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I loved the emotions displayed and the repetition works really well. This is such a worthy entry. Good luck in the contest.
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very sweet piece thanks for entering
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Yes this is just beautiful, a kiss means the world sometimes, beautiful
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
Beautiful write
I really liked how u repeated 'A kiss from a rose on a sunset night.' Its a wonderful poem, thank you 4 entering, &good luck
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beautiful a lovely read and amazing write
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Breathtaking!
I am not a fan of love poems they tend to sound all the same to me, but you have just proved my theory wrong. This is absolutely beautiful. The love expressed in these words is deep and all consuming. There are not words to express how beautiful I feel this poem is. Thank you for sharing and entering. Welcome to round 2. -
Most Impresive
I was moved by the depth of the love portrayed here for your "rose". The imagery of the night at the beach as you experience a kiss from a rose on that sunset, simply breathtaking. i am most honored you shared this poem with us. Thank you for entering.
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Oh how I adore this line..."A kiss from a rose on a sunset night..." so much love and serenity I felt when I read it in each and every line...moreover, the whole poem was so sweet and amazing...may God bless you always dear poet...
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what a wonderfully written piece. It holds a great deal of imagery with that of beauty. You have done quite well and Good luck.
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This was a really great write. I also need your option choice and my random quote Just a friendly reminder. In the beginning when you say "in to", I think it would be more appealing to me if it was "into", but you don't have to change it. I like the rhyming, these rhyming words are refreshing from the regualr old "know" and "no". You have a very nice vocabulary which you use with experience. I love intelligence. I also think it's nice how you repeat the first line and the first five words of the third line. I also really like the story you weaved into the poem. The title is also very appropiate to the write. Just wonderful. I'm putting you in the finalists, so good luck! (I hope I wasn't to professional in this verdict. HeHe! I'm only 13)
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Gees just re-read your post for 13 you know what your talking about, I'm only just starting so am in awe of you! One day you'll be a heck of a judge to poet!!!lol.
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awwwwwww! to be so kissed...A kiss from a rose on a sunset night~ The kiss of my darling rose wife! ~ sighs~ Breath Taking! Thank you so much for sharing this most beautiful piece with me
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Stunning
You are very very good and have no reason to think otherwise. This is a wonderful piece of writing. Beautiful and the imagery is superb. Well done. This was great.
All the best
Wayne
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This is Beautifully Done.
My first impression is of someone very much in love. Emotionally these words enfold you in the blissfulness of eternal love. What a way to say I love you couldn't be better said. There was nothing awkward in this. In the fourth verse the word (wantom) should be wanton just a typo. The title is just beautiful. The first line is just right, and the last line sums this up very well. I liked it very much.
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Very lovely with some beautiful imagery.
Thanks a lot for your entry. I wish you
the best of luck in my contest!
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This is a very sweet write best of luck to you in the contest. Best Wishes
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