ongoing movie
don’t wait the happiness
live life
Author notes
until THE END or ...........
A contest entry
- The Avatar Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very wise words
You have done a very good job of sending an important message in this haiku. Waiting for happiness is a waste of time. I believe you can make your own happiness by living life to the fullest, and most likely fining that special happiness.
Ethereal One
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Such a philosophical haiku, it is great with the avatar of the movie playing. But your L3 is so true, a wonderful haiku.
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What truth you pen. Life does not wait. Morning and evening will still come with or without us. I like the sentiment, here, too. And since we have now, what better time to make the best of it?
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Thanx Karen, In the context of of this contest maybe a bit overdone but it was just what came on the path. One never knows what the muse intentions are
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I like the underlying sentiment of living life which you've drawn from this movie-film avatar-image, Kitesen. Very well written, and thank you for this wonderful entry to the contest!
Jo
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Thanks Jo but it is quite a heavy sentiment I posed here. Could have been a little more lighthearted.
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