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Sheltered By Your Wings

 




Sheltered by your wings, I stand with in them.
Lost in the moments.
As I stand helpless, I can hear the sound of
your heart beating.
I can feel the warm of every breath.
Your strenght yet so gentle, I can feel each
movement of your hand upon my bare skin.
The sweat that flows off our bodys as we feel
this passion of love.
I have no words, and you speak none, for none
is needed.


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  • shaalz
    December 25, 2007

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    Wow! Beautiful. Your lines are true feelings of a woman under the warmth and strength of a man. And this is the feeling a woman crave, however courageous or bold she may be. Oh...U have written it so beautifully. Keep it up.

  • Tercarro
    September 7, 2007
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    A romatic at heart

    Somewhere in your deepest deep there is something smolding and ready to blow.
    Nice work.
    terry


  • raggyann
    August 26, 2007
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    wonderful
    full of passion
    great images and i love the pic


  • Entwining Beauty
    August 26, 2007
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    oh wow what a write so short yet so amzingly done good luck

  • Liquid memories
    August 26, 2007
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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww sweet

    such emotional passion, no words would be needed, as love is all you desire. very nice.

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