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Everything is you

The grass has never been so green
Nor the sky so blue
There's flowers that I've never seen
It all comes from you

Sunshines never felt so warm
You make everything seem new
I laugh in a thunderstorm
When holding hands with you

Stars have never shined so bright
Nor love seemed so true
Now there's magic in the night
It all comes from you

Never did I think that I
Would meet a woman who
I would treasure till I die
You gave me that too

Tomorrow holds a special prize
Wrapped in mornings dew
I hold beauty in my eyes
It all comes from you

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  • Merciful-Manner
    April 28, 2008
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    thank you

    good luck in the contest, nice write

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • Cyprien
    September 7, 2007

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    This was beautiful. I feel somewhat similar about the one that is so far from my grasp, but I remain hopeful. Thank you and good luck in the contest!


  • Mykeee
    August 28, 2007
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    nice feel of admiration. well done........mykeee


  • dreem
    August 26, 2007
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    amazing

    this poem blew me away. this is one of my favorites from you. nice job.

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