Seduction is complicated,
Watch close and I will,
Make you my willing victim,
Mine for tonight and we'll,
Dine on the feast of lovers.
A kiss turns to stroke and,
We turn into wild things,
Groaning and crying shamelessly,
But hey, if it doesn't make you scream,
I’m not going fast enough.
We like it ruthless,
Slick, deep and hard,
Fusing our bodies like pagans,
Bound and writhing in the haze,
It’s hard to say who’s what is where.
I’ve brought you this far,
And it won’t be the last,
Collapsed and breathing heavy but,
Still riding the high to,
The midnight shade of sex.
So take me and don’t stop,
Because I have a giving nature,
And all night to give it away,
So just say yes and,
Don’t you dare hold back.
Sixty-nine and missionary,
Really I don’t care,
We can do it doggie or cowgirl fashion,
Anything to feel you,
In me, on me, all goddamn over.
God yes please,
Bring me to the edge,
I’ll show you heaven if you,
Lie back and close your eyes,
Grinning as I blow your mind.
Author notes
hey, its been a while since i've done this, hope its decent^^ happy birthday.
please don't think this is all i do, i usually do more apocolyptic stuff. i can do sensual,and i'm happy to support this guy becuase he's been kind. happy birthday earl^^
A contest entry
- FOR WOMEN ONLY - MAKE ME HARD FOR MY BIRTHDAY! by Swtpoetryman.
600 points, ended September 4, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this was a great piece for Earl to read and enjoy
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thank you^^ i very much approciate that.especially since you wrote that kick ass peice.
you really caught he tune of the contest and i hope you do fantastically^^
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A VERY SENSUAL PIECE - TO SAY THE LEAST!
God yes please,
Bring me to the edge,
I’ll show you heaven if you,
Lie back and close your eyes,
Grinning as I blow your mind.
And that's not all you were blowing in this sweet and sensual piece, Baby! I TRULY enjoyed it and THANK YOU for entering my contest - as it made me hard and passed my hardness test - hands down - and we all know where!
For now I am sending you three horny but less well-endowed fellows to practice on until we meet again, Darling!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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i'm so very glad it pleases, that was the idea. it was fun to walk down this type of peom again, thank you gfor the opprotunity.
your a regular heffner i think, word wise certainly.
really, this contest can't go wrong.
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hahahaha....this was a horny episode, I like the taste of this naughty 'ride'.....hmmm, as though you weren't passionate and excitable enough....you'll have some poor devil n knots by the sound of it...hope the stamina can match yours!!! Deeply arousing words...from one so young, it's dangerous you know? Fun and sexy read
well done G ..
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god, of all the nights> <.its been a while since ive written anything this shameless, and i didn't quit fail,which is good? i don't know, i feel like a peotry-whore writing this><.heh.
um, thanks?i suppose.
i'll work on not being too risky, it will be more dangerous once i'm legal.^^
you have strange timing^^thanks for breaking the comment ice^^
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