loneliness is not meant for me
When I think of you I am free
making me all I can be
I think of you
When others may stumble and fall
you help me get through it all
though my life comes to a crawl
There's always you
When all is tossed and confused
friendships are lost or abused
when I am battered and bruised
I think of you
When I'm losing the fight
nearly every night
I think of you
when I long to be right
and you're nowhere in sight
I think of you
Please tell me what you think
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...(Sorry, this reminds me of the Keith Urban song "You'll Think of Me"...but in reverse)...still...the sense of struggle and hope is all here and all you...well done, Peter...Peace, Rhonda
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good
i liked it
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Very touching write. Sorry I could not of read it sooner had not been feeling well. Had the flu.
When every thing's tossed and confused
and friendship is lost or abused
when this soul is battered and bruised
I think of you
these lines touched me the most.
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This is beautiful. The last four lines really tie everything together. Great job <2+1
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great job. i love the last 4 lines. the feelings in this are put together very nicely. once again great job!
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and friendship is lost or abused
when this soul is battered and bruised
I think of you
truely an honest description is here my friend..great sentiments here..well done..thanks for reading my poetry and sending your kind words..
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