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As I gaze down upon your face

Missing image

As I gaze down upon your face

I see the beauty that lies within

No more do I see the scars of battle

But the inner you

 

 

You have captured my heart

And did so with so much ease

How could we ever deny what truly lies between us

Such warmth and sincerity

Unbound by desires we so share together

 

 

You and I have what others can only dream of

Contentment so easy to cause a smile

Lifting my heart to float on the gentlest breeze

Captured within a bubble formed from your lips

When you blew me that last kiss before you slept

Knowing that I will share your dreams this night.

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  • penman gold member
    August 28, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. So well done. Congrats on the silver.


  • Sonja
    August 28, 2007
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    Congratulations Mike for this shiny silver. It is well deserved.
    ~Sonja~


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 28, 2007
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    Congrats!! on the silver ~ love ya my dear bro xoxoox


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 27, 2007

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    Beautifully written

    from the heart, as always... Best of luck to you in this contest!!! Peace and love forever, Cyn


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    August 27, 2007

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    AWESOME

    YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB WITH THIS PIECE, POET
    GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST, AND THANK YOU FOR ENTERING IN SAME.
    TANYA


  • Terry-too silver member
    August 27, 2007

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    A lovely poem indeed, and lucky, the the One it was written for! There is something truly blessed in long-term relationships, for it truly reflects the quality of both members. Anything less would have lost it long ago. More power to you both!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 26, 2007
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    Mike

    This is beautifully written,the heart shows how you love this poetry,art is penned deep within..good Luck my friend, SH


  • Amera gold member
    August 26, 2007

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    This is beautiful. It's not the typical angel poem as you have introduced a complex image. Very well done and very creative. I love the kiss captured in the bubble. Great flow and lovely feeling.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 26, 2007

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    I felt all the love you poured into your words...You are a wonderful poet my brother...sighs...Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful heart with us all


  • moon2u
    August 26, 2007
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    very nice


  • Laura
    August 26, 2007

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    this is amazing love you have certainly taken this contest by storm.. i sont waffle as i cant outbeat the length of the last comment lolol all i can say is i love this poem and once again you ahve shown us all this amazing skill you have of writing poetry well done love xxx

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