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Canary in Flight


Kerri Canary rocks my socks.
kerri canary leads the flocks...

Kerri Canary in flight, that is she...
Kerri canary, she shines upon thee...

Kerri Canary oh so bliss.
kerri canary you can not miss...

Love and joy you are sure to see.
when Kerri Canary passes by thee...

With a huge bottle of wine
that will make you very happy.

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"Kerri Canary rocks my socks"

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  • zappa gold member
    April 6
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    "" I love this feeling. You write it with such up-lifting emotion, especially the author note.


  • individuality gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    wine is good, well it can be bad too lol but i will drink it anyway as long as it does its job. a good fun smiling poem.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    January 3, 2008
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    This is Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is totally awesme!!! It has a wistfulness to it and it is upbeat a nice change of pace on here. Your rhyme and meter were both fantastic and the imagery you created with your words helped me to visualize Kerri canary all the way through this piece!!!Thanks fro sharing!!!~~Toni~~


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    December 28, 2007

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    This is cute. I love how upbeat and light-hearted your poetry is. Keep writing. I like your sense of humor.

  • EncounteredEpiphany
    December 22, 2007
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    Spiritual di Inspiringly !!!


    Juan grazie for sharing this poem!

    I wish I were from Las Vegas' I plan a trip in this life...


  • Rose Darkest Night
    August 27, 2007

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    lol cute made me chuckle at the end. At least you followed the rules unlike some others >.>

  • Liquid memories
    August 27, 2007

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    Hahahahaha

    carrying a bottle of wine, thats the neetest thing i have read in some time. this was soft and humorous, delightful

  • EncounteredEpiphany
    August 26, 2007
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    Kerri Canary rocks my socks, even though I'm barefoot

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