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Patriot

Wait,Stop,Be Calm,
Remember those members of the family tree,
Because of whom today we are free.

Shed a few tears for them,
For they shed away their lives for you

Remember those who never
thought about themselves,
So that we could think
about ourselves.

Remember those deeeds,those words,
those fighters who lay down their live battling against swords.

Remember those great atleast for a while,
Because of whom we afford to smile.

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  • The Nose
    October 8, 2007
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    AMAZING

    This Is AMAZING!!!


  • skyviewexpress
    September 17, 2007

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    Seems to be a poem more dedicated to soldiers then to those two writers, but then again they are like literary soldiers. Good tribute to them, thank you for entering and good luck.


    • kunal1090
      September 17, 2007
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      u r write..it is dedicated to soldiers...
      nyway thankyou for u r comments


  • captain howdy
    August 26, 2007

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    "Shed a few tears for them,
    For they shed away their lives for you

    Remember those who never
    thought about themselves,
    So that we could think
    about ourselves."

    These were my favorite lines! Ahother powerful poem!