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cuts

a cut of a wrist,
a wipe of a tear.
come to me,
i'll take your fear.

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  • CountCrimsonAvarus gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    Hey you know you should put this in more of a poem format it would look a lot better and all but thats just a suggestion.
    Count Crimson Avarus