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time is running short

And I'm so sorry for everything.
I don't want it to be like this, us, our relationship.

I hate it when we fight.
The way you yell at me tears me apart inside.
[just like it does when I yell back]

the curse words you scream at me.
how harsh they sound piercing me with sharp edges.

The tears flow fast and heavy.
You know you did this to me.

I just don't know what to do,
I am completly lost.

Please sweetheart, help me with this terrible disaster,
before it is to late.

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To my boyfriend, before it is too late...

Please tell me what you think

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  • xHideFromTheStarsx
    September 21, 2007

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    i can relate to this. honey, i hope you guys pull through, i know how much it hurts when you don't. <3


  • Aquamarine.
    September 8, 2007

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    wow its kinda the same way with my dad except for i dont want to fix it anymore with him...love the poem babi


    • Simple-Fairytale
      September 8, 2007
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      yeah...I'm sorry the relationship with your dad is going badly...but thanks so much for your comment : ] and I hope things get better.


  • XxXAmazed MeXxX
    August 27, 2007
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    Love it

    I love it!


  • whiterabbit.
    August 26, 2007

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    This is so sad. I'm sorry you're going through this and I hope everything becomes all unicorns and rainbows soon. Relationships are hard and when they're going bad, it just tears you apart.
    xx


    • Simple-Fairytale
      August 26, 2007
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      Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment this. It's a really shitty poem, just wrote to express my feelings after getting into a nasty argument with my boyfriend. And thanks, I hope everything gets better for you as well.
      : ]

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