Prince, sit and let me remove your crown,
Let me massage your shoulders, let me rub you down
Let me sit on your lap, let me nibble on your earlobe
let me kiss your lips, let me release you from the worlds hold
Let me kiss you on your neck and arouse you mentally
Let me surrender you my soul, like I surrender to you physically
Let me take you and lay you down, let me rest my hand on your thigh
Give me the honor to kiss your lips, give me the honor to stare into your eyes
Let me have a heart to heart with you, because I must confess
That every moment I spend with you, is another moment that I’ve been blessed
Please tell me what you think
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First I wanted to thank you for your comments on my poem, Sober (Soon) I glad my writing can touch people. But enough about me, this poem is short, sweet, sexy. I like your rhyme scheme as well. The flow of this is great, but most of all it paints a very steamy picture. Well done.
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You been gettin on me bout writing and all that jazz and i stumbled across this poem. I wish i ould be that for a real man, you know a seductress, lover and friend but still the submissive mistress. You captured a really sexy mood something that i'm not to good at doing. short and to the point, it was sultry without being raunchy i loved this!
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I really like this poem. It's sweet and caressing. Just returning the favor. Great write.
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:-)
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This was a nice write. I'd like to see more :)
This was sweet. I like it in its candor. Str8 and direct is sometimes ... well most times, the best approach. I like it
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Gorgeous piece....so worthy...
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Aw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is so sweet. Every girl should have a man that makes her want to be this way with him. Want to cater to him, and just love him. Let him know, girl! He who finds a woman, finds a good thing! I LOVED this piece. - cgirl0410
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yeah!
dats what i'm talkin bout!... man if i could get taken care of like that and have those words said to me.. who knows.. as always ms blacc, your poetry speaks to me, so i'm forever chasing it.. thanx for posting this.
Blac.
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now all i really want to know is who is he and how did he manage to get you so sprung?! LOL, anyway your work is always honest and inspiring. i love the fact that in the poem you had no problem putting this man on a pedestal, letting go of all of yourself, just to get to his essence. nice piece, short and sweet and i think anyone can appreciate that.
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SPEECHLESS
now dats wussup!! go head and cater to dat lucky brotha. lol dat wussup u get 3smileys 4dat one
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brilliant
This was a really beautiful poem, I loved how one can picture this, amazing imagery, it was so real and you did will a poem of this subject matter can easily sound vulgar, but you in aw way made it feel innocent.
Brilliant flow all the way through, great rhythm, I struggle to find fault, well done, love Romanee, x
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Thank you!!! I really appreciate your comments. It's so nice to hear from you again.
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awww!!! This is beautiful....romantic. So glad to see your pen still rollin'. I really liked this one, girl u know how to treat ur man (I just hope he treats u like his princess, haha). But seriously, this was tha shit!
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Romantic..BegZ
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