Inhaling the craving for euphoric delights
her aromatic scent lingering in his memory
the need to taste her driving him home
Visions of soft curves writhing from his caress
blooming lushness from his attentions
knowing she will give as much as received
His lust accelerating through each curve
reckless and restless.
daydreams speed through his mind
Seeing her bared before him glowing in candlelight
posing perfectly upon satin sheets sprinkled with rose petals
eyes glittering with promise and longing.
Anticipating the parting of petal soft thighs
then velvety lips and greedily drinking her nectar,
pressure pulsing increasing to the point of pain
Knowing when he plunders
finding the source of her heat
a perfect union creating a glimpse of heaven
Author notes
Happy Birthday Jeremy!!
I hope you enjoy this take on that beautiful picture.
A contest entry
- CONTEST 1 DAY LEFT by Jeremy0826.
800 points, ended August 28, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A perfect poem, beautiful, sensual...I can see why he rushes home to be with her...you can really feel the need and urgency in this poem and it enhances the experience.
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Wow now this was hot hot hot!!!! and I have been here and can relate
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well written erotica
I enjoy tasteful erotica, and you seem to have a gift for such, I have read several of your poems and will get back later to comment.congrats on the trophy for this piece....freda -
Wonderful sensual write ....very deserving of your trophy...classy and romantic..
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Wonderful
A wonderful write, well done
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Congratulations on a well-deserved silver!
As if the image wasn't completely vibrant all by itself, it came to life even further with this poem. It's an evocative piece, filled to the brim with sensuality and "a glimpse of heaven." Bravo! Don
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Congradulations!!
On the Silver my dear!! Excellent poem!! So romantic!! Steamy too!! A birthday present like this one would retire me!! LOL! I'd go into a coma from the anticipation!! Excent write my dear friend!! Don
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So incredibly sensuous!!! Loved every tasty word! Wonderful!!!
Love~
Az
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So Evolutionary!
Incredible piece! I love it so much, it's so mezmerizing and touching! Nice, nice job on this piece! Very very passionate poem, one of my fav's on this site!
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OMGOSH WOW!!!!!!!!! I CAN SEE THE BEAUTY shinning here! ohhh la la...loving this! Very sensual, passionate, and all on fire! YAY you got a silver! love you bunches cousin!
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Very sensous
Extremely well done. You write extremely well and give a reader a great picture. Great job, Rick
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Such passion and erotica!!You are very good at this.I love your style.Congrats on the trophy.
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very sensual
congrats on the trophy . . like the descriptions in this poem and the flow . .interesting . . like "knowing she will give as much as she received" and "eyes glittering with promise and longing" . . nice write !!
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Beautiful
Congratulations on winning the silver trophy. You surely deserved it and more with this wonderful poem. You have an exquisite sensitivity when it comes to writing erotica. A pure delight to read as always. This passionate poem really drives it home.
David
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*whistles* mmmm! This is beautiful!
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rose petal of mixed in tasty romance i think you did a very great job in delevering this sensual piece congrads on your trophy
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*whew*
let me catch my breath...
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Absolutely beautiful
Enjoyed this immensely
~sugar~
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This is Beautiful
thanks for adding it to the reading list.
e
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I love this. I keep telling people I want satin sheets! I got a little hot reading this. Nicely done.
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Wow!!
Congratulations on Your trophy win Beautiful
Love the message You have brought forth and
the words flow like wine~
Magnificent!!
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Visions of soft curves writhing from his caress
blooming lushness from his attentions
knowing she will give as much as received
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Thank You for sharing Your quill!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire.
See your kind words always brightens my day.
Thank you I am glad you enjoyed.
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I love this image and have it myself. You have real laced the page here with some sensual imagery from the male point of view. That takes some talent and great thinking. This is very well done. Thanks for bringing such a pleasurable read to the pages here at Allpoetry. I love this type of writing myself. I can lose myself in it.
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Excellent
Very well done. A great poem for the picture And congrats on your silver too.
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I don't know why... but I feel a little mollested after reading this. I think the speaker has incredibly tender and appreciative feelings towards women, and the language and form you use is very good.
But for some reason I got a definite masochistic feel from this poem. I'm sorry if that offends you... It was something about the first verse, and the use of the word "plunder".
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What a wonderful write for a birhtday poem this is. Liked the interpretation of this picture - a very sensual and visual poem, great flow as well.
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i really like this. it is how a perfect union is supposed to be. the vocabulary struck me as non-juvenile and that really is important in a poem like this. very well done. i also like the length and formation of the poem. everything that you put in here is very succinctly stated.
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Beautifully written and perfectly interlaced with the title. Phenominal erotic imagery as well. Great write.
. Rewarded 4
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Hey good poem man!
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Dee
this is the best yet
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This is so beautiful and filled with some great imagery. Wonderful take on the picture! Thank you so much for your entry in my contest! I appreciate it and wish you the best of luck with it here!
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Oh wow this is an amazing poem hehe yeah wow you are an amazing writer. I think a cold shower is in order for you young lady hehe. This is na amazing wite but hey you know that already
Goodjob love yeah
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