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~Inspire The Breeze~

If wonderment burst into dreams
could they fall into the skies-

aching to blend the clouds
into pictures that reflect
the words of emotion.

elusive in musings-

speechless of the perfect lines;

to portray the dawn,

without the cliche of tangerine.

 

Mother earth weeps willows
in spells of writers block.
Pondering how to weave a masterpiece.

Sunsets yearning to whisper
expressions through painted hues;
endeavoring for a flame
to spark the artist's wick.

Instead tar stained clouds simmer
regurgitating broken thoughts;
and half hearted ideas.
 None of which move mountains

In strict forms of frustration
inked on a downpour.
Metered syllables of lightening
break the sky-

until it falls through winds;
nudging edges of pen tips- in waiting
to scroll the paper mache of midnight
with stars and moon.

 

Expressions ignite worlds;
where a canvas in the sands-

etch-  Inspired.

 

The breeze rustling sheets of heart;
kissing pitter patters across fresh grasses,
that sway and bend, to tickle smiles.
Until they bloom-

       an epiphany......

 



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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 18, 2007

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    you know i can see why this took gold, this is an amazing poem, it was just was wonderfull done with skill and it was golden, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest


  • Mirthryl
    September 8, 2007
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    I very much enjoyed your "portray the dawn/without the cliche of tangerine" and "Mother earth weeps willows/in spells of writers block/Pondering how to weave a masterpiece". Very visual descriptions.

    I think my favorite line was "Metered syllables of lightening". Enjoyable piece. Congrats on the gold!


  • Everwind Rising
    September 8, 2007

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    I loved this. Your imagery is exquisite and meaningful. Metaphor is masterfully penned throughout and the language is lovely.