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Pain

Hot, Burning
A pressure so deep
Blinding, Surging
Makes it hard to breathe
Gasping, Raging
Fierceness that tugs at the soul
Screaming, Ravaged
Darkest
Void

Author notes

There is pain and There is PAIN!

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  • LittleKnowItAll
    August 26, 2007

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    Ah another nice short poem
    It was pretty, it was what i asked for, it wasn't a heavy read which is good because i just woke up, it's a good description too of a concussion, nicely put.

    Good luck in the competition