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A Mind's Paradise

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I have found a paradise
in a place so far away
The birds sing songs of devotion
to the beauty of this sanctuary
 
The water is clear and pristine
while the waves dance back and forth
playing catch with the breeze
Technicolor flowers adorn the paths
as nature boasts it’s creations
 
There is beauty here
 A serene and tranquil piece of heaven
It is not hard to reach,
it’s as close as a lover’s embrace
as divine as a lover’s kiss
Whenever thoughts of you enter my mind
I am there
 
 
 
 
 

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  • penman gold member
    September 11, 2007
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    Wonderful

    A very descriptive and well expressed poem. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 7, 2007
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    Superb/Romantic

    A very fine romantic/spiritual write. Your imagery is just fine.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 4, 2007

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    Wow,

    Such a beautiful place where grace caresses the soul within the breeze...I adore your wonderful painted picture of paradise. Keep up the wonders of you, love the clear crystal hues. Peace sweet soul, much love to you and yours forevermore.

    -Timothy, aka, poeticweaver~


  • janejainejayne gold member
    August 29, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    This reminds me of my garden at dawn and my thoughts with morning coffee.

    'Technicolor flowers adorn the paths
    as nature boasts it’s creations'

    some of the most beautiful time we spend is alone with nature. Brava! Jane


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    wow this was amaizng it was just so full of imagery and left me thinking
    i loved your take on the picture
    can i come?


  • Whoochi gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    WAYYYY down here I will comment..LOL..sounds like a splendid place...I wanna go NOW!....Well done on the prompt for the pic..Best of Luck!

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