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Her Dark Desire

I, Goddess of your realm,
controlling dreams and fantasies.
Abide my painful pleasures
or pay the everlasting price.

Drool by my command, as I take the helm,
lashed into deeper realities.
You are mine forever,
do as I wish, I'll treat you nice.

But when I say I want it rough tonight,
you bet your ass, you better bite!

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  • intanglio2ring
    August 26, 2007

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    Congrats on the Silver!

    Ouch!
    Did you just bite me?
    Playing a bit rought here - loved it!
    Tang


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 25, 2007
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    I love this one, tells them right from the start who you are and what you will not take.

  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    Whoa,

    I'm lovin' this seductive piece sis, Love your wondrous works. Thanks for sharing, and all the best to you! Peace, Brother Timothy~ xo


  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    As beautifully expressed and penned as you always sem to do. I have enjoyed this piece. I wish you the best in the comp


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    August 25, 2007

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    Oh wow! love that last line Go girl
    All the best in the contest
    Gaylene

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