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Paradise

 Sunsets in my special place,
to the rest of the world I erase.
Nature at best with calm all around,
God showing his love in great bounds.
Colors vivid and bright, giving pleasing sights,
birds call with the dimming of the lights.
Soon to settle in for a nights rest,
for tomorrow we will be even more impressed.

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  • gigimom
    September 14, 2007

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    EXCELLENT POEM. EXPRESSES MY FEELINGS. BLU YOU ARE VERY TALENTED. KEEP WRITING! I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTIONS OF NATURE. THEY SPEAK PERSONALLY TO ME.