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mad at this cat

i cause lots of wrath
people cuss and spit at me
when i cross their path

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  • NoWayJo
    August 26, 2007

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    I really like what you perceived of this cat with attitude by your haiku, Bill, and definitely cat role-reversal by the hissing.  

    Thank you so much for this entry to the contest!

    Jo

     

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 26, 2007
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    Another great and humor-filled haiku that I enjoyed reading! Good luck in the contest!


  • Katilina
    August 25, 2007
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    This is a fun poem. Reminds me of almost something Basho would have written. Very real.