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Two Broken Hearts

She loves him
He loves her

They smile
And nervously look into eachothers eyes

They were together for awhile.

He was entranced.

She was in love
and yet confused

This confusion turned to doubt

this doubt turned to depression

and this depression

...turned to

...Two broken hearts


some of you may have visited my cousin Chelsea's site. hers is FluterTooter91 i mayde this poem as a first poem for her site.

love,
Angel Keltner

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  • Miss-Marilyn
    December 23, 2007
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    I really like this one. I can totally relate to it as well.