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Do I Turn You On?

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silky sheets or melting lava lakes

oh, darling, are you the one
tell me someone. I need to know

 

You've got me wanting more
every second . every day

 

I just want to touch your skin with mine

 

you've no idea the power your words hold
they take me there . && there is wonderful

 

Take the U & I from beautiful
pull out your sissors and cut the word

disect the meaning to the very T

take those presious letters and paste them
together like they already are in my
past spent && wasted, bandaged heart
cuz that's what we've got

 

it's that serge in my stomach
everytime i hear that ring
the leap of my heart
when i see your name

 

do I turn you on?
cuz babe that's what you do to me
with every letter...
&& every thought...
&& I don't care if the world knows it

Author notes

screenname: TheUntoldSecrets
Option: 2 [sesual]

[[♥]]

This is for David.
... and every word is oh so true, Babe...

is it ironic that this is my 69th poem?

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  • second-born
    September 5, 2007

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    oh this is so captivating...the sincerity of your poem is a proof of an overflowing love to your special someone...and I bet he would answer you 'a definite yes' if you asked him that question...


  • Number 13
    August 30, 2007
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    oh ohoh it's great
    and that girl is cute :]


    • EverxEnding silver member
      August 30, 2007
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      I know i was looking around on BMEzine.com and i saw it and i was like...YES! lol


  • adsaige
    August 26, 2007
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    Heh heh...

    I really liked this piece. This is like sensual dirty pretty huh? *giggles* I must definitely be in a weird mode, but I like this. I got your sense of style, and I liked it. You're ahmayzing if I do say so meself.

    Lovely.



    Good Luck, righty-o.


    • EverxEnding silver member
      August 27, 2007
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      Thanks! That means a lot.
      I like mixing things up. I'd say I have my own unique style. I take Abstract, Dirty Pretty, and Free Verse and slam them all together and whatever happens happens...lol
      sometimes it doesn work out but sometimes it does. I'm glad you like this one. It came from the heart.

      Good luck judging the contest!

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