H eels, leather, whips and chains, come with me lets play some games,
A ll you have to do is follow my command, cock strap and leash securely in
P lace, now drop on all fours and savour my taste, lick my ass, finger me hard
P leasure me Earl, FUCK turn me on, suck real hard on my throbbing CLIT shit
Y ou know I don't mind if it hurts a bit, did I say you could touch my tit,you BAD
B OY now fetch me my WHIP!get your ass over that chair, don't make a sound
I t's the first stroke that hurts the most, my PET there's a lesson to learn
R each for my TIT I will whip you again, just follow my commands do you UNDERSTAND?
T rying not to make a sound he nodded, now follow this command, take
H old of your cock and stroke it my PET, make your Mistress nice and FUCKING WET ,
D ear pet now STOP! God I get so much pleasure watching you writhe it gives me such
A fucking BUZZ inside, Now stick your cock up my ass, this is your treat my pet
Y ou've got your Mistress DELICIOUSLY WET. I want you to FUCK me hard, make me
S cream call out your NAME penetrate me DEEP make me burn inside, bodies glisten as
W e bump and grind, breath starts to quicken then subside the tension intensifies
T ensing muscles I THROW back my head, you go deeper as I start to CUM, my anal
P leasure intensifies, I start to moan with satisfied sighs, Moving your cock from
O ut of my bum, your MISTRESS is happy you have passed my test, pet you did not CUM
E asing myself between your thighs, I look into your deep brown eyes, would you like
T o CUM my pet? you start to nod your head, licking my lips you enter my mouth
R oughly you shove it to the back of my throat,sucking, I finger
Y our ass deep in I go,I follow your rhythm as you take control, head in your hands
M oaning, WILD you thrust your hips, now drink this MISTRESS, releasing
A breathless sigh, you release your Cum to the back of my throat with a little piss
N ow Earl please tell me DID THIS PASS YOUR HARDNESS TEST?
Author notes
Happy Birthday Earl
Have a wonderful day
Love ~sugar~
Acrostic
A contest entry
- FOR WOMEN ONLY - MAKE ME HARD FOR MY BIRTHDAY! by Swtpoetryman.
600 points, ended September 4, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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YUM freaking juicy hun loved it!
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i hope to write with you one day because just by reading this i see what the sweet lovely one means this guy is hot perhaps to recieve such devotion and love
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this is some hot ass lyrics i must say now i see why julia is impressed with her onesugar! this was a nice birthday gift it would have drove him crazy if you would have gift wraped your self and had you delivered o what a treat i may check him out
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lmao...
so, did Earl enjoy his Bday Tribute?
Maybe I need to scroll down a lil more and see if he had anything to say, loved reading this again, sugar.
Ephiphany
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Yeah, Piff
He liked it.
Love ya
~sugar~
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Hey Sugar, I dont think anyone else would stand much of a chance..this was (american term) AWESOME...hehe
You even gave me ideas...lol
Sue
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Thank you Sue
So did you..
GOOD LUCK
~sugar~
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Is that bacon I smell, or my tthigh squeeze? This is just too much. And I'm going to tell as soon as I finish reading it ~ again..
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Thank you for commenting
I'm pleased you enjoyed it
Always appreciated
Sugar
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Hot, Hot , Hot....omg, I love this....great job and good luck in the contest, I am gonna read some more of your work if they are as good as this....
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Thank you for commenting
I'm pleased you enjoyed it
Always appreciated
onesugar
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Damn Sugar
This is hot and glad to have ben able to read it before I leave for a few days.
Be safe one and all.
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Thanks Riftkin
Good Luck
~sugar~
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Smoking hot Sis
I am sure the passed his hard test and beyond. You are getting so good at these kind of writes. I love you write and enjoyed every word. Good luck sweety a sure winner. You go girl burn Earl up
LISA
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Thank you Lisa
You're a star
Love ~sugar~
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WOW.....
I know Earl gone love this....Hardness is on it's way, sugar
...oops, he already saw it then, huh, I just scrolled down a bit and saw his responce...well, I don't have to say another word then....He like it
Great entry, sugar....
Piff
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Appreciate your comments piff
But you know that
Love ~sugar~
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I'M CUMMINNNNNNNNN, MISTRESS!
And YES - I'm here to say that it passed my hardness test - hands down - and you are well aware where! LOL!!! For now I'll send you three more naughty boys to play with who aren't as big and/or as thick as me BUT we all have to start somewhere, Baby! He! He! And you're the first entry and the first lovely lady to be added to the finalist list!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Earl,
Have you cum yet?
Appreciate your comments
as always
Love ~sugar~
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wow! fuck yea i love it michelle
happy birthday earl and this is beautiful
baby very beautiful
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Hi, Julia
love ya babes
Appreciate your comment
~sugar~
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STUNNING !!!
STUNNING!! BE MY MISTRESS NOW!!! HAHAHAHAHA
BRILLIANT WRITING SUPERB FLOW AS WELL AND THE IMAGERY IS OUTSTANDING. EARL IS ONE LUCKY MAN. WONDERFUL SUGAR. WELL DONE.
WAYNE
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Wayne,
I'll be your Mistress! Haha!
Appreciate your comments
Love ~sugar~
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