smokey mountains float
comfortably in low haze
pure feline "Blue" purrs
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- The Avatar Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 30 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOL...This is so cute! Loved the imagery, the word choice, the whole atmosphere of your haiku. I would only minimise "S" in L1 and remove the period at the end of L3. Congratulations on the GOLD!
Charishma
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Thank you my friend for your help
( now edited) Glad you enjoyed
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I really like how the "Smokey" and "Blue" might be transposed as to both the cat's name and mountains by this haiku, Cutie. When picking up this avatar, I was hoping someone would work it as a "smokey" cat, and you did so wonderfully by this haiku.
Thank you for this great entry to the contest!
Jo
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Thank you
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