Two pointed ears
At the end of my bed...
A monster is waiting
He needs to be fed!
I peer through the dark
And quite clearly I see
Those big scary ears
Are twitching at me!
As the moon rises
Behind a dark cloud,
The ears move again
And I scream out loud!
Then the silvery light shows
That what I suppose
Is a big hairy monster -
Are only my toes!
A contest entry
- Pick one of these children poem title's and role with it by longlife.
465 points, ended September 3, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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still reading this poem and im still not bored of it!! hehehehe
hope to c u soon
luv yew
From Heather
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this poem is great and megan ses she lives it too lol
love and laughter ellie -
this is really good and funny cyya soon autie chrisie love yewwww
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Awww this is very cute indeed. Thank you for sharing and the best of luck to you in the contest.
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This is really cute! Read so nicely and was fun to read. And I loved the ending!
Good luck in the contest.
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How cute! this is a wonderful children's poem!I think you are gonna do great in the contest! I hope you had fun writing it cause it is a very fun cute poem!Good luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The ending was the best part! and I think many little kids would love this poem! -
I was expecting a dog or something at the end. The hairy toes... gross. lol Good write.
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Very funny poem and I wasn't expecting that ending! Well done and good luck in the contest - great rhyming too.
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This is really cute and funny! Oh those shadows and things in the dark that looks so incredibly scarey!
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