I see your beauty in shades of coffee brown dipped in cream.
You spin my taste buds into dancing decadence of cherry supreme.
I'm all tied up and twisted into your delicious schemes.
I see my transformation in a production to marvelous to dream.
You take me places in my mind that unlocks ancient memories of another time.
My eyes are wide open but I still appear to be blind.
Your gentle words guide me through the darkness to a realm of intimacy.
There you lay in radiance naked as the open sea.
I run to your wadding waters where you wait eagerly for me.
I take your hand and we make love, crossing over into eternity.
My shell is broken as I grow wings and fly.
In the rapture of the moment I glimpse at you smiling
and suddenly I know why.
Your love has shaped me into something so brand new.
As I look into your eyes and see my reflection
I know it's because of you.
I am your creation made by your own hands.
Now the boy has finally surrendered to the will of the man.
A contest entry
- Im in the mood for love by mantis180.
700 points, ended September 23, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a beautiful and stunning write, I truly love the metaphore of the ocean, to the intimatacy. Excellent write and very well done.
-Ash -
Well brother Darell, this was very softly and sensually done indeed. A very nice poem, best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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this was passionate you sort of held back but its still
a very sexy write here i am stil giggling off of your last write.
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